Esther Sylvester

Hey Zibbie! Thanks for the review, again. Okay, I'm going to say that I enjoyed this chapter more than the first. It flowed to me better and I liked the ...

Hey there! This was a very strong start for a book. You did very well with keeping the reader interested. I found that some of the bad language was not ...

Hey Wasted Fantasy! I shall be reviewing you again! Hurrah! Once again another solid piece. You made me feel pain for Johnny and his life of lovelessness. (yup, it's a ...

Hey Zibbie! I shall be reviewing you today. First off, I would like to say that the story caught my attention right away. I liked how the story escalated in ...

Hey WF, thanks for the review. And now I will do the same! I enjoyed this. I can't wait until you define the characters more and I understand more about ...

Hello there! I'm kind of new and I just saw your post and decided to read it. I just want to say that I liked this a lot. You have ...

This piece is quite solid. It kind of reminds me of Peeps and Twilight mixed together. Heh. I want to know what happens next, and that doesn't usually happen! Keep ...

This is a very difficult story to review due to the fact that it is entirely dialog. (Except for the ending, which ends rather vaguely) But it isn't put together ...

This was quite interesting. I enjoyed most of it. There were some passages that I couldn't help but smile at. There are some things that I noticed, though. And I ...

Hey. I liked it! I read all the way to paragraph 23, but I have to go soon so.. I enjoyed the story very much and I hope you continue ...